Ben, I was able to get the gist of your post, but I think it would really help your readers if you edited it. I think you meant supplant instead of supplement, which kind of changes the meaning of the sentence. There are bunches of sentence fragment problems too, where the commas are making it hard to get at your meaning. I'm not trying to be a pedant, I just think it might help more people get your intended message out of what's really an interesting post. Cheers.
“An engineer explained to us that hundreds of ear impressions were gathered in the name of research, and while each one obviously boasted its own unique shape and size, one single characteristic remained uniform across the board: the entrance into the ear canal is not a perfect circle, it's an oval.”
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Ben, I was able to get the gist of your post, but I think it would really help your readers if you edited it. I think you meant supplant instead of supplement, which kind of changes the meaning of the sentence. There are bunches of sentence fragment problems too, where the commas are making it hard to get at your meaning. I'm not trying to be a pedant, I just think it might help more people get your intended message out of what's really an interesting post. Cheers.
Thanks, it's amazing how much easier it is to proof your own work after you've stepped away from it for a while.