Change "the the moves" to "the moves", "division drop the price" to "division dropped the price", and "but asside from" to "but aside from" and this article may pass as a third grader's report. Geez, is English reporting in this country going in the crapper...
There shouldn't be a comma after "Blu-ray would win," either, but I think that's fourth grade grammar... maybe in another year we'll see some improvements? :-)
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Change "the the moves" to "the moves", "division drop the price" to "division dropped the price", and "but asside from" to "but aside from" and this article may pass as a third grader's report. Geez, is English reporting in this country going in the crapper...
Fixed, thanks.
There shouldn't be a comma after "Blu-ray would win," either, but I think that's fourth grade grammar... maybe in another year we'll see some improvements? :-)