Typo: "It's main feature" --> "Its main feature"

I placed an order for the 5GB $129 iPod (F8513LL/A), but when I came back to look at the order status, it had changed to a 10GB $169 iPod (F8737LL/A). I believe the latter is the second-generation model. I called Apple sales about this, and the rep didn't understand how I was able to find the item for sale, even after she checked with her supervisor. Apparently the only way you can get to it on the Apple Store site (without the direct link provided by TUAW) is by doing a search for F8513LL. I believe the item listing is simply a mistake, and I've cancelled my order.

Typos:
"it's App Store" --> "its App Store"
"for it's first generation" --> "for its first generation"

Typo: "it's own energy acquisition" --> "its own energy acquisition"

"genre" is a noun, not an adjective.

Typo: "in it's 3rd edition" --> "in its 3rd edition"

unilke?

Your grammar is not venerable.

"it's venerable browser software" --> "its venerable browser software"

"It's official public debut" --> "Its official public debut"

"it's words" --> "its words"